5-7-5 Poetry
A 5-7-5 follows the structure of a Haiku but without any limitation to the topic. While a Senryu, is primarily concerned with human nature. A Haiku, primarily concerned with physical nature. A 5-7-5 poem is a free form with the only limitation being the syllable count.
So have fun with the 5-7-5 poetry type. But it must follow the proper syllable count. A 5-7-5 poem has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again.
- Example
Don't eat yellow snow (5 syllables)
It's not healthy as you know (7 syllables)
Besides, it tastes bad! (5 syllables)
- written by starkat
Example and 5-7-5 instructions from Poetry Dances
Here are my attempts :-
Life may not be fair
But the good Lord makes each day
Cherish everyday
Thinking about life as a whole
~ 23 April 2015
Health is a dear friend
Always treat her with respect
She will act her best
Thinking about fragile life health
While days are still bright
Live with great passion and love
As your life unfolds
Life always busy
with a load of care and tear
Be cheerful always
Keep your life balanced
with many loved ones around
Treasure them as gems
*************************
When the dark nights come
Time to be cherished and loved
While I still hang on
Dearly beloved
Come visit me while I'm here
I try to stay on
Deep into the dark
I'll be brave and courageous
Thinking about fragile life health
Mum, Father in law, Tsen Grandma all hospitalised recently
~ 23 April 2015
Here are my attempts :-
Life may not be fair
But the good Lord makes each day
Cherish everyday
Thinking about life as a whole
~ 23 April 2015
Health is a dear friend
Always treat her with respect
She will act her best
Thinking about fragile life health
~ 23 April
Live with great passion and love
As your life unfolds
Life always busy
with a load of care and tear
Be cheerful always
Keep your life balanced
with many loved ones around
Treasure them as gems
*************************
When the dark nights come
Time to be cherished and loved
While I still hang on
Dearly beloved
Come visit me while I'm here
I try to stay on
Deep into the dark
I'll be brave and courageous
When God calls me home
*************************
Try not to be sad
When I am finally gone
For my job is done
All my life I've been
Cherished, Loved and Courageous
Fight my battles well
My great pride and joy
Is to be loved by you all
I bring that with me
*************************
As I homeward bound
Celebrate my life moments
Each cherished moments
I am truly glad
To have lived a life that's full
As God's precious child
I be waiting there
At heaven's glorious shore
I will wait for you
Mum, Father in law, Tsen Grandma all hospitalised recently
~ 23 April 2015
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